TeamXHawk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[.The Murderer]

It's quite good

Doing this style made you improve A LOT. Your animation is very entertaining. You have nice special effects. I have noticed the character staying a bit too much in the air at some times though but that's not a big problem. I can't get much in the detail, I'm afraid not to judge something wrong, I don't know this style very well. Overall it was entertaining and well animated. Keep it up. :) 9/10 5/5

Theodor responds:

Finally I don't need to sent you a bitchy reply back, thank you Hawk my man.

[Dog Of Man]

Very deep

I could make an entire comment on the art and meaning of this animation. Yet, I don't think I know what was in your head when you made it and I don't want to make a mistake so I just won't. Very artistic. Excessive violence really was excessive violence, unlike other animations around. It was quite disturbing really... Yet, you did very good. I liked it. :)

[2 Minute Battle]

Too many blurs

Basically, your animation is made of overused blurs and crappy smoke effects. >_>' 4/10 2/5 Put more work in your animation, don't let the computer do all the work.

zackfire17 responds:

i will next time
i actually agree
too much blurs, especially when they are fight hand to hand
i draw my stickmen with the brush tool, but everyone else who animates good stick movies seems to use the pencil and line tool
i just tried it, its so much simpler to do fbf
so next time im gonna increase the frame rate and draw more sequences of fbf
instead of just blurring everything when they move real fast

but blurring really doesnt make things a huge amount easier
it actually makes it harder to do fbf
the only thing it helps with is make the characters look like they're moving really fast

but blur is really useful and it makes thing look really cool
so im still gonna use it

i think i've contradicted myself twice here

oh well

[Drunken Stick]

Surprising really...

Wow, I wasn't expecting something like that! Pretty big score for your first big project! lol, if you were at FA all this time I understand. :P

[EW: Matt Sucks]

LOL AWESOME

Brilliant work as always, looked a bit rushed though :D

[The Assumption Song]

Brilliant !

I have attempted some jokes this way too but the way you made this so smooth is just amazing. It's very funny.

[Seeds(1)]

Awesome, man

:) I liked the artistic way you did it, the design was good, you have to smooth out the lines.

[Angry Dog - Lizard Dome]

Awesome !

I watched the whole series, it's brilliant! Good job, man!